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Through the view ports of the Star Destroyer Relentless, the molted sky of hyperspace drifted silently by as Captain Teirrier stared coldly at his bridge crew before him. Not so long ago in the distant past he would have felt forgiveness or at least pity for the crew of his starship. But not now, not after the destruction of Mount Taintis and every last one of the Grand Admiral Thrawn's Sparti cloning cylinders. What was not left of the Empire was hardly enough to even take control of a single planet. Their main shipyards were destroyed and they were running out of military personnel to man their remaining ships. The Relentless itself was one of the few, but precious Star Destroyers in functional condition. Functional...As he thought it he almost laughed at his foolish choice of words. Only four of the original ten turbo blasters were operational now, and the starboard deflector shields were running at critically low energy. To top it off, the hyperdrive was constantly malfunctioning and the techs working on it apparently had no explanation. All in all the Star Destroyer Relentless was in tough shape. But none of that mattered now that he was in charge. Captain Teirrier had plans for his precious empire. Big plans. |
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A lesson on the court |
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Character change in Macbeth In the begining Macbeth and King duncan respected each other,And after showing great talent on the batlefield,duncan called Macbeth a"valient Kingssman!,Noble gentleman. |
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Afternoon It was about 8:00 when we got there. We started fishing. We had a kind of cycle where one casts out and lets it float away before the other. Then when you retrieve it, you go behind the other person. |
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